tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3554125151787997248.post7046553405825697629..comments2024-02-02T23:22:33.356-08:00Comments on From Sarah, With Joy: The 2 Levels of Plot: A Lesson from UpSarah Allenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01185278849400551014noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3554125151787997248.post-52145001527376161842011-10-13T04:06:17.069-07:002011-10-13T04:06:17.069-07:00This was great! thank you! would love you ro follw...This was great! thank you! would love you ro follw and read mine!<br /><br />http://insidemartynsmind.blogspot.com/2011/10/what-do-you-see.htmlMartyn Kitney https://www.blogger.com/profile/07564829931381366013noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3554125151787997248.post-45199886706163204602011-10-13T02:43:32.776-07:002011-10-13T02:43:32.776-07:00Good point, well made.
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@mooder...Good point, well made.<br /><br />mood<br /><a href="http://moodywriting.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Moody Writing</a><br /><a href="http://twitter.com/mooderino" rel="nofollow">@mooderino</a>mooderinohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01523337588830695638noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3554125151787997248.post-8434993926229328052011-10-12T19:08:06.220-07:002011-10-12T19:08:06.220-07:00This is really great advice. Totally helps me refo...This is really great advice. Totally helps me refocus! Thanks!<br /><br /><a href="http://the-creationofbeauty.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow">http://the-creationofbeauty.blogspot.com</a>the creation of beauty is art.https://www.blogger.com/profile/00631784690728820368noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3554125151787997248.post-24105816908602250992011-10-12T09:02:59.901-07:002011-10-12T09:02:59.901-07:00It's not a bad idea. This reminds me of the &...It's not a bad idea. This reminds me of the 'ordinary world' vs the 'extraordinary world'. <br /><br />In my story, the ordinary world (day to day issues) was a young man who's worst days were when the old lady kicked the produce cart and grumbled about prices. And having to take the teasing of two local girls because he worked and they didn't.<br /><br />The extraordinary world is one full of airships, magic, and time travel. Not the place one would normally find a "dirt farmer'.SBJoneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10457239074744509487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3554125151787997248.post-48067934343454979802011-10-12T05:31:11.791-07:002011-10-12T05:31:11.791-07:00I agree with this. Don't just show me the end ...I agree with this. Don't just show me the end of the world, show me that one guy trying to get back to his family before it hits.Sarah Tokeleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13273148070092101085noreply@blogger.com