tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3554125151787997248.post3268527019530657379..comments2024-02-02T23:22:33.356-08:00Comments on From Sarah, With Joy: Writing Challenge: Describing EyesSarah Allenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01185278849400551014noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3554125151787997248.post-18569926497927995512013-10-26T01:47:03.105-07:002013-10-26T01:47:03.105-07:00Cement. His eyes left the feeling of a concrete ju...Cement. His eyes left the feeling of a concrete jungle that was more like a prison than anything else really. And his eyes told of things normal folks like you and I would be too scared to see. His eyes were different from the rest of us, which was pretty obvious.<br />They were wild. Untamed. And just thinking of ways to describe his stone cold eyes made me want to retreat. Retreat and return to a place where I would not be faced with the same truth his eyes screamed to me. Retreat to a place where I can keep on pretending the things he knew did not exist.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3554125151787997248.post-28060967035789629912013-07-12T09:32:26.528-07:002013-07-12T09:32:26.528-07:00Describing eyes is a real challenge. Loved the pos...Describing eyes is a real challenge. Loved the post!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11677955331684698979noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3554125151787997248.post-20399874971561620792013-07-11T18:24:26.043-07:002013-07-11T18:24:26.043-07:00"His eyes seemed different than any I'd s..."His eyes seemed different than any I'd seen before. Rather than the average brown, blue, or green you'd expect, these eyes seemed to tell you more about his personality than how he looked. The light grey color allowed one to see his soul: troubled, stubborn, and barely even human."Kyle Welshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08567036917033549600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3554125151787997248.post-40832433274866785632013-07-11T17:27:47.584-07:002013-07-11T17:27:47.584-07:00I can't think of a thing to say. although I do...I can't think of a thing to say. although I do think facial expressions are much harder than describing eyes.<br /><br />hope you have a great day.lissahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11012085842881252635noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3554125151787997248.post-25453911315555119022013-07-11T15:23:10.288-07:002013-07-11T15:23:10.288-07:00Loved Becky's description. I couldn't desc...Loved Becky's description. I couldn't describe eyes if I tried, no imagination for things like that, that's why I don't write books.Johttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14087140585742801854noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3554125151787997248.post-43259559643525437952013-07-11T13:26:19.285-07:002013-07-11T13:26:19.285-07:00Very good post. I'm always looking for a way t...Very good post. I'm always looking for a way to think outside the box with writing. :)Melissahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08516493326566981116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3554125151787997248.post-37379319191271052092013-07-11T07:16:55.113-07:002013-07-11T07:16:55.113-07:00Battle, battle, battle.
His eyes left a raw spot...Battle, battle, battle. <br /><br />His eyes left a raw spot inside of me, the chaffing kind. They sent an urge inside me to run. Would I be hunted if I did?<br /><br />This was fun.<br /><br />Hugs and chocolate,<br />Shellyshellyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09596621767297173021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3554125151787997248.post-21034076447284480252013-07-11T05:54:37.885-07:002013-07-11T05:54:37.885-07:00It's super hard because there are only so many...It's super hard because there are only so many eye colors. And yes the battles with the cliche never end!Jennie Bennetthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17331827076858223497noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3554125151787997248.post-87105451726196748522013-07-11T05:34:14.934-07:002013-07-11T05:34:14.934-07:00His eyes were like molten silver pooling around an...His eyes were like molten silver pooling around an onyx stone. They seemed to shimmer as though a current passed through them; clear, electric, and unnerving. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01168932830993157564noreply@blogger.com